The usual writing complaints
Aug. 27th, 2012 03:30 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
petronia1) Steve Rogers is not allowed Lana Del Rey music videos. Anything but Lana Del Rey music videos.
2) As soon as I opened the MORE PLOT gate Tony Stark took over everything, which is to be expected but creates a morass of POV issues.
EDIT -- wait did I actually forget to post the finished chapter to LJ/DW? Ahaha. *copypastes from Tumblr*
Title: The Motion of Bodies In Public Spaces (chapter 2)
Author: Petronia
Rating: G (I knoooww, why read it until/unless I declare a pairing, but at the moment it seems beside the point? This is one of those slow builds like Senza Fine, though, so I think I can promise eventual emotional payoffs. If anyone is particularly invested in seeing me write Steve/anybody makeouts pls reply by separate post)
Characters: I've listed everyone I know will be in the fic in the AO3 tags, even if they're not in this chapter.
Warnings: none apart from the same Steve Rogers feels currently infesting Tumblr as a result of leaked deleted scenes and such. He and John Watson can stoically refuse to speak to their therapists together.
Next Chapter: I thought it was just Aliens, but the more I think about it the more I realize all James Cameron movies are potential minefields insofar as Steve is concerned. EVEN TITANIC.
2) As soon as I opened the MORE PLOT gate Tony Stark took over everything, which is to be expected but creates a morass of POV issues.
EDIT -- wait did I actually forget to post the finished chapter to LJ/DW? Ahaha. *copypastes from Tumblr*
Title: The Motion of Bodies In Public Spaces (chapter 2)
Author: Petronia
Rating: G (I knoooww, why read it until/unless I declare a pairing, but at the moment it seems beside the point? This is one of those slow builds like Senza Fine, though, so I think I can promise eventual emotional payoffs. If anyone is particularly invested in seeing me write Steve/anybody makeouts pls reply by separate post)
Characters: I've listed everyone I know will be in the fic in the AO3 tags, even if they're not in this chapter.
Warnings: none apart from the same Steve Rogers feels currently infesting Tumblr as a result of leaked deleted scenes and such. He and John Watson can stoically refuse to speak to their therapists together.
Next Chapter: I thought it was just Aliens, but the more I think about it the more I realize all James Cameron movies are potential minefields insofar as Steve is concerned. EVEN TITANIC.
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Date: 2012-08-27 10:41 pm (UTC)I am not sure exactly why Steve Rogers is the character who has me writing fic for the first time in three years, but, hey. Writing fic! For the first time in three years! ...I think I forgot how, orz.
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Date: 2012-08-27 10:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-08-27 10:49 pm (UTC)